http://news.yahoo.com/s/ap/20070907/ap_on_re_us/virtual_schools

The link above will take you to an article on Virtual Schooling. In this article the majority of it is written in an "I say" format, where the author explained how virtual learning is a better way to learn and gave many examples why he felt that way. There are a few times when the writer inserted a "they say" but two of the "they says" repeated the same statement. The writer seemed unable to find more opposing points besides the fact the virtual learning will stunt socialization. I also noticed that the "they says" were put in only after the author had made most of his "I say" points. Overall I would say that this piece was not effectively written because the "they say" points were repetitive and not well addressed.